It must have been some journey to have been walking in such conditions during the night. Your description of how you were feeling left me with the shivers as I read.
Hi there forest, I can see a horses face peering through a gap with a mane. Do you want to hear something very strange? Well I'll tell you. We have mold on our entrance wall that we can't seem to get rid of, but it appears to look like and...
Two souls linked together in so much love that even being on the streets can't bring them down, though destitution makes life hard they do their best to survive. A very moving piece of writing.
This is so captivating Penny and reminds me of the Pre-Raphaelites which I so love. I could imagine a maiden or a queen waiting for her beloved to return from war. It also fits in perfectly with the I P.
Great start to your story.
Posted on Fri, 31 May 2019
Great start to your story. Hope to read more.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Jaspernon The Prince : The Rise of the Cult of the Goddess : Ch.1 : Court Of The King (Section 1)
I wonder Richard! Did you
Posted on Sat, 01 Jun 2019
I wonder Richard! Did you find your gold? I hope so.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Gold
This is such an emotional,
Posted on Sat, 01 Jun 2019
This is such an emotional, thought provoking poem Graham of human desires and mistakes, yet nature will win through in the end.
Hope I've grasped what you were trying to convey.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in El Condor Pasa
Hi Richard,
Posted on Fri, 31 May 2019
Hi Richard,
It must have been some journey to have been walking in such conditions during the night. Your description of how you were feeling left me with the shivers as I read.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Chill
Hi there forest, I can see a
Posted on Tue, 28 May 2019
Hi there forest, I can see a horses face peering through a gap with a mane. Do you want to hear something very strange? Well I'll tell you. We have mold on our entrance wall that we can't seem to get rid of, but it appears to look like and...
Read full commentPosted in What Do You See?
Frighteningly amusing, but
Posted on Sat, 25 May 2019
Frighteningly amusing, but makes me realize why I'm so glad we have abc tales.
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Read full commentPosted in Nitpickings
Beautiful poem about one of
Posted on Thu, 23 May 2019
Beautiful poem about one of my favourite flowers. I just love the leisurely pace of meanderings in this piece.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Bog Brilliance
Hi Richard, I don't know if
Posted on Thu, 23 May 2019
Hi Richard, I don't know if this helps.
but these days we easily tire as
nurse comes round with nightly cocoa,
at this late hour we all together chime...
Oh Oh - bedtime.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Older Men Talking
Two souls linked together in
Posted on Wed, 22 May 2019
Two souls linked together in so much love that even being on the streets can't bring them down, though destitution makes life hard they do their best to survive. A very moving piece of writing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Anthony and Cleopatra
This is so captivating Penny
Posted on Tue, 21 May 2019
This is so captivating Penny and reminds me of the Pre-Raphaelites which I so love. I could imagine a maiden or a queen waiting for her beloved to return from war. It also fits in perfectly with the I P.
Thank you for sharing.
Jenny...
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