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Found this deeply moving. I
Posted on Tue, 22 Sep 2015
Found this deeply moving. I think it's the simplicity you've opted for. Not that it isn't complex but your colloquial dialogue, those deliberately chosen acts of togetherness don't seem a big deal until that last stanza. You nail that fear and...
Read full commentPosted in 'Mine's a Saveloy!'
The personification of that
Posted on Tue, 22 Sep 2015
The personification of that black dog is really powerful. All that darkness and the confines of the mind well conveyed, here.
Read full commentPosted in Lurker
I like this. Opening stanza's
Posted on Tue, 22 Sep 2015
I like this. Opening stanza's rhythm sounds like a train on tracks. Is that intentionally worked or magic? I know, I know. Lots of relationship debris and the allusion of violence, hot on many well-cultured heels. Your subject(s) often feels...
Read full commentPosted in Kickings from my Sweetheart
Brilliant, Tina. Inspired and
Posted on Sun, 20 Sep 2015
Brilliant, Tina. Inspired and often found, well paced, conveys the ghastly small talk and life going on.
Read full commentPosted in Why Does it Always Rain at Funerals? (Poetry Monthly)
Really scenic and
Posted on Thu, 17 Sep 2015
Really scenic and transporting.
Read full commentPosted in On A Cloud
A lovely one, Paul.
Posted on Thu, 17 Sep 2015
A lovely one, Paul.
Read full commentPosted in A Picture Of You
The pace of this accentuates
Posted on Thu, 17 Sep 2015
The pace of this accentuates the words beautifully, in places it is resurgent and then reaches a crescendo of uninhibited expression. Homage, indeed. Has echoes of Baudelaire's Fleurs du Mal, too.
Read full commentPosted in Homage to Mr. Ginsberg
This is so apt and carefully
Posted on Mon, 14 Sep 2015
This is so apt and carefully arranged. That flower, that single human, how easily crushed but how esily helped, too. Worked with unaccompanied asylum seeking children from the point of dispersal - straight from lorry to hostel. All those one acts...
Read full commentPosted in Poem For a Flower
This is really good. Shifting
Posted on Wed, 09 Sep 2015
This is really good. Shifting perceptions for your reader, mix of ghostly and surreal, the level of fine detail I tend to expect of your work.
Have deliberated if it should open: 'It was starting to rain when I arrived home that...
Read full commentPosted in Smudge
Hi Jesse, it's an interesting
Posted on Mon, 07 Sep 2015
Hi Jesse, it's an interesting read. Some lovely metaphors and descriptions.
Difficult to follow without paragraph breaks. Perhaps you could put those in?
Think you could cut Adolpho's detailed character description - height, clothes...
Read full commentPosted in The Funeral
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