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317 of my comments have received 322 Great Feedback votes

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Much of my life feels like

Posted on Fri, 25 Jul 2014

Much of my life feels like this when I look back. This appealed to me at a personal level, beyond that, the environmental images are gritty, with their own emotional intensity and a certain sort of happy go luckiness that brings it to a chamring...

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Posted in By The Lake Of Banky Water I Sat Down Where The Grass No Longer Grows

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A vision of self-love and

Posted on Sat, 19 Jul 2014

A vision of self-love and synchronicity beautifully captured, Edithrose. 

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Posted in Reflection in you

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This is superb Bee, I think

Posted on Mon, 07 Jul 2014

This is superb Bee, I think you can interpret it seriously or with some humour, too. Depends which type of poetic mood oe;'s Worzel Gummidge head has at the onset. I got a sense of tongue in cheek, but irregardless, the words are spot on and give...

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Posted in Once I Was A Poet

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Sorraya, a disturbing tale of

Posted on Sat, 28 Jun 2014

Sorraya, a disturbing tale of murder. Like the direct storytelling style, I think it could end more powerfully on 'No one seems to notice me.' That last paragraph dilutes it some, it could be cut and end with more mystery. Hope you don't mind my...

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Clever, this. At first I was

Posted on Thu, 26 Jun 2014

Clever, this. At first I was carried along by the act of leaving and the guilt ensued, but there's elements of something else at play and dare I say, a sense of generational tit for tat, yet done without malice. It's painfully deep. Mother...

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Posted in Life on Mars

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Hi Ben, I like the title of

Posted on Mon, 16 Jun 2014

Hi Ben, I like the title of this and the descriptive scene setting. It feels relaxed and contemplative. Familiar with London, it took me there.  That said, I was frustrated that I didn't find out what was wrong with him by the end, I found myself...

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Posted in Sunset Over Southbank

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This is charming Tina. For it

Posted on Sun, 15 Jun 2014

This is charming Tina. For it's hilarity, plus the voice you've created is so typical of that class in that era.

 

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Posted in My Heart Belongs to Daddy

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A forever relationship is as

Posted on Fri, 02 May 2014

A forever relationship is as fitting as a comfy chair and the luxury of a night dress at noon and an artist that knows beauty isn't youth but compassion. Stunning.

I always fondly jest my partner for bringing uncool cumbersome flasks of...

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Posted in The Blue Chair

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Our society's a dystopian

Posted on Sat, 26 Apr 2014

Our society's a dystopian nightmare, this is precisely why. You've stapled it all down and the anonymity of Z hammered it home harder.

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Posted in Cadogan Street

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This is beautiful, you make

Posted on Wed, 23 Apr 2014

This is beautiful, you make natural miracles so special to read about.

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Posted in Frog Spring (2)

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