Summer Kings
By threeleafshamrock
Thu, 01 Apr 2010
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The mist hovers, cradled within the valley,
wisps starting to break away and run
from the lazily blooming dawn.
We perch on the lower branches
of the great Oak, surveying our Kingdom.
The smell of fresh cut grass,
signaling 'High Summer'.
The sound of stone on scythe, cutting through
the bird and grasshopper symphony.
Somewhere a cow lows, udder empty; can full.
The smell of a rasher frying, wafts briefly;
salivation guaranteed. And with the fog
dissolving, as candyfloss on the tongue,
revealing the multi-green fields of Kent...
the Kings run home for breakfast.
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If I close my eyes will you
If I close my eyes will you read it out loud, then I will truly be there,
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Beautifully atmospheric,
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Beautifully atmospheric, Chris! It's a sunny day in West Yorkshire today so I only have to look outside my window to picture this ;)
Magic xxx
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Such beautiful imagery- "And
Such beautiful imagery-
"And with the fog
dissolving, as candyfloss on the tongue"
A pleasure to read :-)
Beeme xx
k.
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I really like this one Chris
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
I really like this one Chris - can't wait for summer now xx
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This is wonderful, Chris,
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
This is wonderful, Chris, although when I first read it, I must admit I was a touch worried about the cow;-) He seems fine now, fortunately;-)
You really do create a colourful picture with your words and I can smell the new-mown grass. Roll-on summer,eh?
Tina XX
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As your summer comes, so
As your summer comes, so mine goes. All this does is remind me of what I'm about to lose. Bloody lovely work, though.
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