Cruel Tricks And Wrong Turns
By Bradene
Sun, 21 Nov 2010
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Stooped beside the trash bin
he scrabbled around,
his hand pulling
out a small polystyrene carton.
Opening it, he found
a half eaten burger in a bun,
he stuffed it unceremoniously
into his hungry mouth
whilst his other hand
was still busily searching;
for dessert?
Images of what he may find
freaked me out;
I tasted bile in my throat
smelled vomit on my own breath.
I approached him,
then hesitantly offered
my Mars bar and hot Latte.
His faded blue eyes grew wide
with maybe a question?
- What was it?
Why would she do that?
or,
how did I get here?
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this is really good Bradene
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
this is really good Bradene - I particularly like the last few lines
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Time is a cruel mistress to
Time is a cruel mistress to some of us. the world is full of bittersweet moments like these.
Loved it
Dan
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I loved this too. especially
I loved this too. especially the gesture.
;)Pia
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This is beautiful,
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
This is beautiful, Val...both the poem and the gesture, as Pia says;-)
Tina xx
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the last few lines are great
Permalink Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
the last few lines are great as they transcend the man in question, "how did I get here" could be applied to all of us.
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