a Southern Oregon storm
By seannelson
Tue, 15 Feb 2011
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squalid
howling
great bare trees
tossing and tossing
ice-cold raindrops
pattering
on windshields
and tired wiper-blades,
on fire-hydrants,
on loose dogs,
on cracked roads
in cracked neighborhoods
where the government pays
for much of the heating,
and the people vote for conservatives
as their pastor advises them
after melodic traditional hymns
ice-cold rain drops
pattering on pine trees
on sage-brush hills,
on plywood in pick-up trucks
and work gloves
and baseball caps
and red ears
squalid
howling
great bare trees
tossing and tossing
"It's a good day to stay inside,"
says my hardy dad
with a bag of my groceries in hand
and a smiling grimace on his face,
headed out for more errands
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If I ever want an image of
If I ever want an image of America I will read your poems Sean- a beauty this one
;)Pia
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another word picture really
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
another word picture really beautifully done
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this poem is fun to read out
this poem is fun to read out loud. great sounds to it!
well done
cheers,
jose.
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Yes this is really good, and
Yes this is really good, and the ending is brilliant. :-)
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A word picture indeed. A
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
A word picture indeed. A wonderfully crafted poem.
Tina
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Me too, a brilliant read -
Permalink Submitted by RachelPatricia on
Me too, a brilliant read - cheers, sean :)
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