Poetry in Motion (I.P.)

Gold cherry

By Silver Spun Sand

Tue, 03 May 2011
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17 comments
 

She were grace itseln,
un mi ol heart skipped a beat...
bronze, be her body,
un a reet dazzlin sheen...

At any price, aah noo,
aah ad t’mek her all mine,
un aah fondled her,
only reet gen’le, mind.

Aah mounted her, neece un slow...
her were made fer mi, she wuz;
if aah cood boot ring her bell
aah cood be her own troo luv.

Aah felt her therr, beneath mi,
she were jus the way aah like,
poetry in motion – her un mi,
as off aah rode on mi bran noo bike.

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Submitted by hilary west on
This is great with a lovely surprise ending, and the Geordie reet proper dun !

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Ta, hilary. That's reet kind o ya;-) Tina

 

Submitted by seashore on
Good on you for tackling this and making it work, Tina. Also liked the ending but I thought it was West country with a bit of Yorkshire thrown in....

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
I think you hit the nail, right on the head, Coral;-) Tina

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Tina, I know you never put this under humour, but I have to admit having a right good giggle, my son wanted to know what I was laughing about. This IP is turning out to be one of the best, as far as I'm concerned. A brilliant piece Tina. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Am really pleased you enjoyed, Jenny, and I only hope your son saw the funny side too;-) Tina

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi again Tina, hope you weren't offended by my comment, it was meant in a good way. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Thanks again, Jenny;-)

 

Submitted by Overthetop1 on
This is 'reet good.' Congrats too on cherry.

Overthetop1

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Thanks, OTT. Reet glad you thought so;-) Tina

 

Submitted by fatboy74 on
At first I thought Yorkshire but then realised I was a bit too far south - always amazes me how much variation of accent and dialect we have in such a small country. Very much enjoyed this Tina and didn't spot the end til the end. :-)

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Glad you enjoyed, fb. I spent a lot of time with a mining family in Durham, as a child. Their accent fascinated me, and also the distinct difference in dialect of one of my 'uncles' who came from Newcastle. The UK has a wealth of wonderful accents, and long may they all continue to thrive;-) Many thanks for reading. Tina

 

Submitted by Highhat on
I guessed at an english dialect. I thought it was dandy Tina. really well done. First I thought that the object was poetry in motion and then a horse but it turned out to be a bike. Fantastically (word?) well done. ;)Pia

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Hi there, Pia. I think 'fantastically' is a wonderful word and I'm so pleased you enjoyed. Yours was a 'reet corker', too;-) Tina

 

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Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Silver-Spun-Sand great accent just seen this excellent, and congrats poem whoops! missed (IP) and Facebook and Twitter pick of the day. Missed you by not going to London. then,bet it wa a good night. Got brother Scotland one Somerset accents difficult, difficult born Susex. cleverly done peom.I have a job when saw them to work out.Their accents. 'Och a waye wi you' so on.Nor could my dad then. Well deserved cherry to.Nite nite, fooled me a bike. Oh and the cherries. Have now corrected for you sorry. julie xx

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Hi Julie;-) No, I couldn't make it to London, unfortunately. Glad you enjoyed this one and thanks for telling me. Tina xx