Freedom

Hi Richard :) Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Thank you also for saying 'I write well' I think I write reality and from the heart and most times I try or hope to make people smile, but the jury is still out on good lol but I do appreciate what you said. I do not mind any suggestions and I did originally put remember rather than remembered, which I may change back thinking on that,and change goodness from good which is a good suggestion thank you, however the rest I may stay the same, I aimed to get a message across, and for me even if one person was not judgmental for one hour after reading my poem I'm happy,rather than thinking about bringing this particular one to life. But for many pieces that would be more suited which is a very valid point, which I will remember Richard :). Keep Writing Keep Smiling :)

Hi Pia :) I hope your not to bad :)) Thank you so much for your lovely comment, it means a lot. take care Keep Writing Keep Smiling :))) Trish :)))

Sorry Pia lol I also meant to say, thank you for wishing me good luck, that also means alot. But I need every bit of luck, lol as there are a lot of brilliant writers on here (which I am not lol) on here, but as long as I hopefully get my message across and people at least think about what they may say or do to even one person they next see, then iv won to me :))))

Hi Julie :) Thank you for asking, Not a great day to day more ways than one, but coming on here reading these lovely comments have really cheered me up so thank you and I hope your ok!!! I love the last few lines the best to and thank you for reading and commenting, means a lot. And your good wishes for the comp. Keep Writing Keep Smiling :))) Trish xx

Hi Magic :) I hope your well too :) Thank you very much for your lovely comment which really with the others cheered me up to day and I was a taken back by what you said, even if the last lines were the only bit you really liked i appreciate it. :) Keep Writing Keep Smiling :))