Scary Bear

Cherry

By shades

Wed, 28 Mar 2012
  • 1610 reads
7 comments
 

Oh hairy bear
Oh scary bear
I’m over here
You’re over there
I see you look
I feel your stare
I run
You chase
A crazy pair
Through the tangled wood
We tear
The curve
I swerve
You follow me
You plunge
You lunge
To collar me
I see my chance
The hollow tree
I’m in
I’m up
It’s victory
None to you
And one to me
Not so scary
Hairy bear
Growl
And prowl
I just don’t care
You’d eat me up
I’m well aware,
But I’m up here
And you’re down there.

©RS2012

Certificate U
Poem
Childrens Verse
Children's

Comments

Submitted by Raventongue on
Made me smile. Excellent rhythm and word choice. Way to scare the children :)

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
love this poem

 

Submitted by blighters rock on
This would work well as a picture book.

 

Submitted by shades on
Thank you for taking the time to comment on this short verse. Very much appreciated.

Submitted by sid on
I agree with the Blighter, it would make a brilliant picture book and has a great metre for reading aloud. Bound to become a Storybook Corner favourite!

 

Submitted by fatboy74 on
I hope you can draw as well as you write these wonderful poems, or that you can find a really good illustrator shades - these poems are great.

 

Submitted by shades on
Thanks FB. I'm working on my illustrating skills. I really enjoy putting these together and appreciate the feedback.