You Breathe

Thank you so much Rich, Stan, and Natalia. Means a lot. And thanks for the sharp eye, Stan. :) Did it in a rush, to be honest, so I missed that. I'll fix it now.

Jess

Short and very sweet - nice

Permalink Submitted by seashore on Thu, 2012-08-23 15:32

Short and very sweet - nice one.

Thank you sea, much

Permalink Submitted by Jessiibear on Thu, 2012-08-23 20:09

Thank you sea, much appreciated.

Jess

You breathe I hum You sing I

Permalink Submitted by mikepyro on Wed, 2012-08-29 04:43

You breathe I hum You sing I strum Really some of the best simple poetry I've read in a long time (don't read much poetry, granted, but that doesn't change how well done this was) Simple, unwasted, brief but it remains in the mind long after I read it. Read it twice, actually.

Give me the beat boys and free my soul! I wanna getta lost in ya rock n' roll and drift away. Drift away...

Mike, thank you. Your lovely

Permalink Submitted by Jessiibear on Wed, 2012-08-29 04:57

Mike, thank you. Your lovely comment brought a smile to my face. Glad you enjoyed.

Jess

Another fine piece - smooth,

Permalink Submitted by JupiterMoon on Wed, 2012-08-29 18:23

Another fine piece - smooth, deft and entirely uncomplicated. A work of art indeed.

Thank you, Jupiter! :)

Permalink Submitted by Jessiibear on Wed, 2012-08-29 20:53

Thank you, Jupiter! :)

Jess

You Breathe

By Jessiibear

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I've read this several

I love the delicate

Thank you so much Rich,

Short and very sweet - nice

Thank you sea, much

You breathe I hum You sing I

Mike, thank you. Your lovely

Another fine piece - smooth,

Thank you, Jupiter! :)

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