Night noises (IP)
By Rhiannonw
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With a sniffle and a snuffle,
and a sudden snort,
the silences of darkness are rare and short,
there’s a giggle and a gurgle,
and a low long growl,
a hiss, a hum, a murmur,
and a screeching hoot or howl
from a passing flitting owl.
There’s a smattering of raindrops,
and a pattering of paws,
a clattering of breeze-blown nuts (one plops),
the scratch of tiny claws;
a whooshing wind that batters,
pulls abscised leaves and scatters,
the rubbish shakes and clatters.
There’s a scuttle and a scrunch,
a rustle, slither, crunch
amongst the dry leaf litter,
a distant thundery mutter,
followed by a rolling rumble,
an agitated rodent’s bumble,
a bark, a slurp, a chew … :
the sounds create a ‘view’
of what’s unseen,
– do you ‘perceive’ each scene
now written, read and heard
by onomatopoeic word?!
[IP:using onomatopeic words]
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I liked this fun piece!
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Damn, autumn's here, this is
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Hello Rhiannonw, I think
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Hi Rhiannon
Hi Rhiannon
This was fun to read, and I'm sure you had fun writing it too. And how true it is, if you are lying awake, how many noises you can hear in the night.
Jean
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