Soon sixty IP

By Highhat

Sat, 09 Feb 2013
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I had a notebook once
I’d jot down when I was available
I’d make appointments
I had a busy life
Darting in and out of places
And keeping track .
Everything neatly accounted for
I’d even consult my notebook
When to see friends
I don’t have a notebook anymore
I seem to remember well still
Closing in on sixty
I’m lucky to be able to remember
And I live as though every day is my last
Grabbing all the love I can get
And cherishing every kind remark
Making up for the foolishness of the past
When I couldn’t remember anything
Without my notebook

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Comments

Submitted by The Walrus on
I'm 50, Pia, and I still have a diary-cum-notebook, but I often forget to check it.

Submitted by Highhat on
I don't have much to have to remember Walrus so I manage without.Thanks for reading. ;)Pia

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
I found this very interesting, Pia — the perspective on the rushing life, and the last 6 lines were particularly lovely. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Highhat on
Thank you very much Rhiannon- glad you enjoyed. I would hate to rush around like that again-you get a bit mellow with age. ;)Pia

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Pia, I could relate to this piece, being nearly 60 myself. I have loads of diaries from when I was young, but again like you, don't bother keeping one anymore. Still, it's good to look back, don't you think? Jenny.

 

Submitted by Highhat on
Sometimes memories are all you have to hang on to Jenny. Thanks for reading. ;)Pia

Submitted by celticman on
I think there is resonance in other's writing that acts as a kind of notebook and this makes sense to me. thanks Pia.