Waving Goodbye

By misskelizabeth

Sat, 12 Oct 2013
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Untold story, untold pain
As I sit here looking at your remains.
It was the 26th August 2010
The day god took you for a hand to lend, 
We lost our mother, a wife and a friend.
I put on a smile, just to pretend.
But what lies under the smile is a mystery,
I'm just glad your out of your misery. 
I hope one day I wake up,this was all a dream
because this feeling is getting way beyond extreme
in the letter you wrote me you said not to grieve
but I swear that word is just make believe
 How dare you leave my side
just as I was on a bumpy ride
when I needed you most you turned into a ghost,
now i'm waving goodbye.
 tear drops stroll down my cheek
people begin to think i'm a freak
 but they don't know why i'm hurting this way
and memories are starting to rot like decay
Because when I needed you most you turned into a ghost,
now i'm waving goodbye.
Certificate U
Poem
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Comments

Submitted by Linda Wigzell Cress on

Lovely Katie, so sad, so true.  You are a credit to yor Mum.

Linda

Submitted by Bee on

Very moving because it sounds honest and from the heart

Bee

Submitted by camilla on

I lost my Mum yesterday. Today I looked in the churchyard  to find the special words people put on headstones which give something more than name and age. The best one I found said something like " her laughing spirit lives on in those who knew her".

 

Submitted by misskelizabeth on

Hello Camilla,

I'm sorry for your loss, thoughts are with you. I know how hard it is losing someone you've looked up to all your life. I really appreciate your comment at such difficult time and that grave stone has a beautiful but true saying, we continue everyday to live for those who once was here living.

 

hope everything is okay and thanks everyone above.

kate 

 

Submitted by misskelizabeth on

Hello Camilla,

I'm sorry for your loss, thoughts are with you. I know how hard it is losing someone you've looked up to all your life. I really appreciate your comment at such difficult time and that grave stone has a beautiful but true saying, we continue everyday to live for those who once was here living.

 

hope everything is okay and thanks everyone above.

kate 

 

Submitted by Denzella on

Hello Kate,

This is a lovely expression of your sad loss.  To lose your mother when you are still so young must be very hard but I feel sure she's looking down and saying, 'Yes, that's my Kate down there.  I always knew she would make me proud.'

Moya

 

Submitted by misskelizabeth on

Thank-you for that comment Moya, brings tears to my eyes! I really hope so.