Spiritual - There's words and

Cherry

By Ray Schaufeld

Fri, 25 Oct 2013
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10 comments
 

Always an 'and'

When I'm open to it.

The third one

The other one

Lee way

Debatable passage.

 

Pauses

The      spaces      inbetween.

 

Reasons to express

To pull it out of me.

Then sometimes

Good things happen.

 

From my hardscrabble chaotic mayhem

My soft-edge faith.

 

I shall take care

When writing       talking      listening

To crayon in

Myself    yourself      'and'

 

 

 

 

 

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Comments

Submitted by Ray Schaufeld on

Thanks for the cherries, dear greengrocer.       Elsie

Submitted by Ray Schaufeld on

Thanks Misunderstood. I am glad you like this       Elsie

Submitted by Bee on

Good one, Elsie.

Enjoyed.

Bee

Submitted by Ray Schaufeld on

Glad you enjoyed this     Elsie

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

As has been said, Elsie, great writing, and well deserving of its cherries.

Tina

 

Submitted by Ray Schaufeld on

Many thanks!               Elsie

Submitted by VeraClark on

Your spin on the normal intrigues me. You make fabulous use of silence and sound in this.One to read aloud.

 

Submitted by Art of the Diver on

Nicely done Elsie... Congrats on your Greengrocer's well placed wee gift also... take care

Submitted by Ray Schaufeld on

Vera, Art of the Diver thanks for reading and enjoying      Elsie

Submitted by Ray Schaufeld on

Bear I'm glad you like this.

Although I am not a tradtionally spiritual person (my favourite Biblical words are 'and it came to pass' because they show narrative strength) I do have this 'soft-edge faith'.   Elsie