An Indecorous Sweetness
By Ewan
- 1886 reads
It conjures bloodied mud and men,
yet there were sunny days,
and grass and flowers grew
between shell holes and trenches.
Blue skies stretched over Flanders,
khaki and stone-grey clothed figures
whistled and smoked and did not fret
over third-lit cigarettes.
The drone in the air might be apian
on these fine days, and not airmen
writing legends with red coloured wings.
Tokens moved over maps
by day and night,
so troops moved over ground
- although peach-cheeked subalterns
believed the contrary.
But the lights were dimmed,
for some, on cool evenings,
sniped out from some distance;
the glint of white vellum
signed with love or kisses
enough to draw the final lot.
An indecorous sweetness,
to be thinking of hearts and homes,
as one stops and the other is lost forever.
A drone in the air is counterpoint
to the bells of hell going ting-a-ling-a-ling
for them and not for us.
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Beautifully written.
Beautifully written.
I think pointing out the 'good' moments helps to highlight the horror of it all.
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I like it. The soldiers had
I like it. The soldiers had their good moments, basking in foreign sun, smoking, dreaming of love Elsie
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Nice piece Ewan. I could
Nice piece Ewan. I could almost hear that drone, be it apian or airman.
Linda
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Hello,
Hello,
Really enjoyed this. That penultimate stanza is my favourite from a very well thought out poem.
Moya
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Only just read this, Ewan. It
Only just read this, Ewan. It's a wonderfully evocative piece. There's something airy about it, and yet very real.
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