Remeber Me Smiling, As I Want You To Keep Living

By prettyrose

Thu, 10 Jul 2014
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It's not for you to bare my pain,
That life deputized for me.
Which stagnates into your present
World and makes It empty.

Such happy times roamed our life,
And although we cannot share the
Same destiny now,I do not want
Yours be marred with so sadness
And regret.

So while I thank you for your love
And all your genuine tears,remember
Me not just for today, isolated in an
unknwon new world,while you sit in
Church and cry.But smiling in
Eternity.

And months or years ahead when I slip
From your memory, even tempory,
Do not worry,for every ray of sunshine,
will be me, smiling behind heavens protective
Wall.For I have serenity now.

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Submitted by torscot on

What a sad little tale you weave here Prettyrose

Regards 

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Submitted by prettyrose on

smileyHi Torscot.

 

Hope your well. Yes I do with this one, as much as I would like to always bring smiles and sunshine, sadly the reality of our some times cruel life, is death, pain etc. But appreciate you taking the time to read it, and hope you liked it.

 

Take care

 

Trish

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by hudsonmoon on

As sad as this was, Prettyrose, I still loved the imagery in the last stanza. Good one. 

Rich

 

 

Submitted by hudsonmoon on

As sad as this was, Prettyrose, I still loved the imagery in the last stanza. Good one. 

Rich

 

 

Submitted by prettyrose on

smileyHi Rich, firstly sorry, I thought I responded to your lovely comment sooner. I hope your well.

 

Thank you for your kind words and taking the time to read it, I love the last stanza also :)))))

 

Take care&keep up your great work&YouTube post's :)))

 

Trish x

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx