Ramblers
By loquaciousicity
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’Tween hither and thither we wended our way
skipping, dancing through sand dunes, in seascape croquet.
While woven in waves watching dolphins at play
I first tasted her lips in the ocean’s wild spray.
Mystic moonbeams, suffusing clouds’ shimmering sails,
unleashed us and whisked us down sensuous trails,
soon evoking the trills of untamed nightingales
as our passions pervaded green valleys and dales.
Being spectres of splendour in wanton sashay
we mastered our meaning in love’s matinee –
the breezes, in passing, slowed down to survey
blazing bodies embraced in youth’s blooming bouquet.
With the wind as our wings, till the Never we flew,
two gypsies, on junkets through dusk’s residue
gently floating like pollen to everywhere new,
so eluding pearled teardrops that paint the past blue.
Yes, we gamboled and gambled, two waifs led astray,
with our shackles afire and anchors aweigh –
rising higher and higher, the sun lured our sleigh,
teasing time was our temptress, night’n day after day.
Having stars in our eyes and all time as our view,
we’ve drifted, like dreamers where sprites rendezvous
and feasted on laughter and sipped morning dew
while rambling forever as one made of two.
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Gosh, Terry, the vocabulary
Gosh, Terry, the vocabulary and rhyme in this one amount to quite a feast for a word-lover like myself, of which you are one, naturally.
Totally breathtaking throughout...and the last three stanzas, especially, quite blew me away...to the loveliest of places, of course.
A gem.
Tina
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Like Tina, I get carried away
Like Tina, I get carried away by your musical use of words – and so from time to time aren't quite sure where the lovers haved been heading, except that they are happy, and seem committed, as the lovely conclusion 'and rambled forever as one made of two' . Rhiannon
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