At the Year’s Gate

By Rhiannonw

Thu, 31 Dec 2015

6 comments

1 User voted this as great feedback

Permalink Submitted by EB on Thu, 2015-12-31 11:34

I think it reads well together and separate.

Permalink Submitted by Rhiannonw on Thu, 2015-12-31 12:38

Thank you, EB. I thought that after writing the two verses! Rhiannon

Permalink Submitted by jeand on Thu, 2015-12-31 14:16

Hi Rhiannon

Very appropriate and the right sort of shape to fill some of the cracks in the dyke.

Jean

Jean Day

Permalink Submitted by Rhiannonw on Thu, 2015-12-31 15:28

! Thanks, Jean. Rhiannon

Permalink Submitted by Bee on Fri, 2016-01-01 10:33

I thought this worked really well all ways, too.

Bee

Permalink Submitted by Rhiannonw on Fri, 2016-01-01 10:42

Thanks, Bee. Rhiannon