Little Girl's Dream

By skinner_jennifer

Sat, 24 Dec 2016
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12 comments
 

I feel the essence of

this Christmas Eve

filling my senses

with fragrant warmth,

 

submerged in a

little girls glee

at the thought

of her smile,

 

before she drifts

away to dream of

sweet nothings that

will fill a sleepy space,

 

where night lingers

submerged in darkness,

the only sound a gentle

breathing till Christmas Morn.

 

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Submitted by celticman on

simple and sweet. 

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Jack,

Glad you liked this poem and appreciate you letting me know.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Ray Schaufeld on

I like it.smiley

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Thanks for reading and the feedback Elsie.

Happy New Year.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by jeand on

Hi Jenny

Yes, I too like this poem, and the gentle reassuring sound of it.

Jean

Jean Day

Submitted by hippie girl on

little kids crack me up christmas

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Jean,

many thanks for reading, glad you saw the gentleness of this poem.

appreciate the feedback.

Happy New Year.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Hippie girl,

they sure do make you smile. smiley

Grateful for the read and your thoughts.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Penny4athought on

This touched my motherly memories and warmed my heart. Children's smiles and inoocent wonder on that night are tangible and sweet and so is this poem. smiley

Penny4athought

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Penny,

so glad I touched your heart with this poem. Christmas was made for the young and there's nothing like their excitement to give us a smile.

Many thanks for reading and your lovely comment.

Jenny. smiley

 

 

Submitted by Shannan on

Your poem just sent a wave of calm and peace over me as I read and empathised with the little girl and wished I were she, remembered moments were I was... such a wonderful capturing of the essence of the Baby of The Morning :)

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

What a wonderful comment Shannon. Sorry I've taken so long to reply. Many thanks for sharing your thoughts which put a smile smiley on my face.

Jenny.