Not Me
By PoppyS
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Your brush strokes make me smile
you have weaved fluorescent purple streaks
about my hair.
Standing tall on my head, a hat
crafted from wire, all shiny bright and prickly.
Porcupine springs to mind
what I wonder, was on yours
when you painted it?
At the sitting
you offered me a plastic cup of lemonade
the fizz went up my nose,
I sneezed, you laughed.
What was the meaning of all that.
It doesn’t look like me
you have captured me young
salad days – party nights
excessively over confident
in my own pig headed way.
The painting was a birthday present
just me, my smile, and that hat.
The rest of me, seemingly lacking
of suitable attire.
I stand back admiring its playfulness,
such a damn shame that it resembles
someone else.
Someone:
Who would never be me…
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I like the ambuguity in this
I like the ambuguity in this piece Poppy - and it's made me hope it's about a real painting because I'd be very curious to see it!
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This really conveys that
This really conveys that playful guesswork of attraction. Constantly wondering at the relevance of certain actions, what are the motives? do they like me? trying to figure out what the other is thinking. Really like this poem.
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