With Best Wishes …

Cherry

By Rhiannonw

Fri, 14 Dec 2018
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7 comments
 

Is this a magic wish,
or cheesy trash,
or sweet desire
or prayer
we’d know and share
much happiness and cheer
throughout the coming year?
comfortable, and a heap
of fun, no cause to weep
(though sometimes weeping brings release,
relief and reconciliation, peace)
satisfaction, usefulness,
kindness received, and kindness given,
best wishes for this season
and on through more …
with everlasting vision?

[IP: a Christmas wish]

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Comments

Submitted by mickleinapickle on

Ah, yes... the world needs more magic to wish for.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Oh, no, just real kind desires, and more real prayers for God's real powerful and wise blessing! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks for cherries! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

You are truly on a roll, Rhiannon, with poetry that constantly hits the spot. This seasonal one is another fine example of your craftsmanship.

Luigi x

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, Luigi, but I don't know about that, some things appeal to some and not to others, and sometimes the IPs stir the thoughts in surprising directions! And some ideas work quickly as verse, and others seem to go through many stages before coming clear! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I like the idea of kindness recieved, and kindness given,

best wishes for this season

and on through more...

with everlasting vision?

Nice choice of words Rhiannon.

Jenny. 

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, Jenny. Rhiannon