angelica (after reading Onemorething's beautiful poem)
By Di_Hard
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Reality is a trap.
In this garden no sun warms.
Underground, worms squirm in a rootless world
as tongues before words.
But then, there, at the back, shoots
pale green, unfurl
leaves, strong as wings, pull
stems up, tall and strong – where in church
organ pipes’ sonorous voice supports believers' praise,
here, hollow cellulose soon soars above
the dank depress of soil, all sown seeds’ despairing.
High, high as a man, more, an angel, come
into this darkness to show Life’s glory.
Reach in, touch the cool fresh thriving of it and
smell! Sweet and rich and vivid as stained glass wraps you
in a gift of curing. And see, against the clouds
a flower opens, its wonderful umbrella of light
made from many small joys
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Oh, I feel very honoured.
Oh, I feel very honoured. This is so lovely, Di. I love the idea of leaves as wings and worms as tongues before words - brilliant. Beautiful and uplifting. x
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This is so vivid Di - a well
This is so vivid Di - a well deserved cherry, and always so nice to see something inspired by another poem. thank you!
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This is wonderful Di, and so
This is wonderful Di, and so inspiring.
Jenny.
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Absolutely lovely - such
Absolutely lovely - such vivid imagery. I do love it when writers draw inspiration from each other. It's a very special spark. Brilliant stuff.
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