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By lenchenelf
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A grey au revoir
civil as we are,
dusk claims our day
yet
laughters' lilt parts
this moment
to ripple of palette
and sound,
touches our lines
with rays of gold.
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Beautiful! The way things are
Beautiful! The way things are going, I think Ewan might win the prize for most inspiration
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I missed this somehow and it
I missed this somehow and it's very beautiful! And great use of language. It's our Pick of the Day. Do share on Facebook and Twitter. The painting is from here: https://tinyurl.com/4pvau6hn
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I had missed it, too, and it
I had missed it, too, and it is wonderful, I love the idea that even when parting kindred spirits are united by the same light, both within from what "delights" and makes shared laughter, and from without, by the sun. And that you have "au revoir" made me think of how clouds constantly meld and dissolve and rejoin.
It's just brilliant, the emotion you have evoked, a whole conversation/story, without saying any of it!
ps should laughters have an apostrophe?
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Lovely. Congratulations. I
Lovely. Congratulations. I love it when words and pictures merge.
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