Nuages

Gold cherry

By lenchenelf

Fri, 03 Jun 2022
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13 comments
 

 

 

A grey au revoir

civil as we are,

 

dusk claims our day

yet

laughters' lilt parts

this moment

 

to ripple of palette

and sound,

 

touches our lines

with rays of gold.

 

Certificate U
Poem
Nature

Comments

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

Beautiful! The way things are going, I think Ewan might win the prize for most inspiration

 

Submitted by Ewan on

-as beautiful as Django's Nuages. Well done.

Author Page at the 'Zon
 

Submitted by lenchenelf on

Very kind of you Ewan, your poem was lovely.

Yes, I think he qualifies as a national treasure, Insert smiley

Best as ever

Lena x

 

Submitted by celticman on

echoes off our better self. 

 

Submitted by lenchenelf on

kind of you to read and comment, a response to mood music, windblown cloudscape, crepuscular rays :)

best as ever

Lena x

 

 

Submitted by onemorething on

I missed this somehow and it's very beautiful! And great use of language. It's our Pick of the Day. Do share on Facebook and Twitter. The painting is from here: https://tinyurl.com/4pvau6hn

 

Submitted by lenchenelf on

though I feel any accolades belong to both original artists.

You are very kind.

best as ever

Lena x

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

I had missed it, too, and it is wonderful, I love the idea that even when parting kindred spirits are united by the same light, both within from what "delights" and makes shared laughter, and from without, by the sun. And that you have "au revoir" made me think of how clouds constantly meld and dissolve and rejoin.

It's just brilliant, the emotion you have evoked, a whole conversation/story, without saying any of it!

ps should laughters have an apostrophe?

 

Submitted by lenchenelf on

what a lovely and very generous comment.

Yes, I still suffer the ancient curse of Apostrophe, an often missing, misplaced and lesser known God of confusion :)  One day, I'll get it right. Thanks again.

Best as ever

Lena x

 

Submitted by celticman on

gold indeed. 

 

Submitted by lenchenelf on

Kind of you to stop by and read

Best as ever

Lena x

 

Submitted by catherine poarch on

Lovely. Congratulations. I love it when words and pictures merge.

 

Submitted by lenchenelf on

kind of you and a lovely comment.

Best wishes

Lena x