The Cherry Blossom (I.P.)

By threeleafshamrock

Sat, 04 Jul 2009
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Blusher on the face of the forest;
cosmetically enhancing
like the pink cheeks of a lover.
A summer Christmas tree,
sunlight jangling in its branches.
Its fruit will be generous; sweet.
But I would feast
on the blossom
until my eyes are satiated
and my palate brushed dry.

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Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
http://cwis.marywood.edu/archives/IMAGES/Arboretum,%20Cherry%20Tree.jpg

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
How much you have said, Chris, with these few, carefully chosen words that so describe that beautiful picture. I liked it... a lot:-) Tina xx

 

Submitted by sarah wilson on
I see one of these beautiful trees from my bedroom window. A lovely poem Chris:) sarah x

Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Very concise and very effective Chris - I'm liking this new style ;) Magic xxx

 

Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Before anyone asks; 'Palate' is meant to be spelled that way (could it be a pun?) lol.

Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Thanks Tina, it truly is a wonderful sight in full bloom; I defy anyone not to stand and admire. Glad you enjoyed. ;)

Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Hi Sarah, Lucky you; I have to travel a bit to see one of these wonderful works of nature, wish I had one outside the back door. I am told the soil here where I live is to acidic. Thanks for reading ;)

Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Thanks Magic, not sure that I have any particular style; I'm a Philistine, who just sort of writes it down as it feels...if I'm lucky, it works lol. ;)