Jokey

By celticman

Thu, 10 Mar 2011
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8 comments
 

The absurd depths
Da dum Da dum Da dum
Lingerie of language
Slow to reveal
More to conceal
The nuance nuisance
Polysyllabic translucence
The heavy tresses
The lighter stresses
Of comic verses
The delightful anticipation
The heart full intoxication
Deft draftness in time
Of thought crime.

Certificate U
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Definitely a poem, and a deft one at that;-)

 

Submitted by celticman on
Thanks Silver. emmm?

 

Submitted by seashore on
"Lingerie of language"..... interesting metaphor but I quite like it!

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
I agree with seashore! You would have to be totally sober to say it though

 

Submitted by fatboy74 on
Really good wordplay - seems like you are having fun with these poems celticman which is about right. :-)

 

Submitted by Sooz006 on
This reminded me of one of those mugs, or pens where women in bikinis take their clothes off. By the time you get to the last word, she's naked... can we have a man next time, please? Nice wordplay.

 

Submitted by celticman on
Thanks Sooz, but who said it was a woman?

 

Submitted by Sooz006 on
The word lingerie did, men in satin would be waaayy too hairy.