Spider

Cherry

By Amazon

Tue, 20 Jan 2009
  • 894 reads
4 comments
 

Such a scary insect.
Pandemonium, the way it scurries.
Is it going to weave a web or scramble all over you?
Don’t move an eye lash.
Eat your breath.
Roll your eyes side ways and it might just disappear.

Certificate U
Poem
Humour

Comments

Submitted by Geoff Smith on
I think that this poem is really very good indeed. It is gently humourous but slightly edgy too. I love the line: 'Eat your breath'.

Thanks for reading. I am grateful for your time.

Submitted by tamara on
Yes!I agree,it is very cleverly written and so descriptive too.

Submitted by Amazon on
Wow, another of my poems has just been cherrypicked. "Spider" Thank you very much editors.

 

Submitted by tamara on
Congratulations!