Your Heart

By Amazon

Wed, 18 Feb 2009
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Sound of your heart beat,
Is it possible to measure the ping pongs?
Let it remind you that you are breathing well,
Every second, listen for the thump,
Now your blood is keeping your vital pump going,
Cradle a medical heart,
Every bit of it was perfectly made.

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Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
I love the line:- "Is is possible to measure the ping-pongs?" An imaginitive choice of words. Tina

 

Submitted by Amazon on
Tina, Thanks for your wonderful comment. I enjoy playing with words as in "ping-pongs".