Overload

By Bradene

Tue, 07 Oct 2008
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Mybrainoverflowswithwords
in no particular order.
Theyspillfrommymind
hit the floor with a thump.
Myheadspinsoutofcontrol
and I fall with the words.
Mythoughtsburnuplifemiles
yet I stand stock still
Whiletheworldwhirlsaroundme.
I want to capture the words
buttheyflashpasttoofasttocatch
then I forget which of them I want to save.

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Certificate U
Poem
Life's Ups And Downs
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by tcook on
You need another 'o' in the second last line!

Submitted by Bradene on
Thanks I hadn't noticed that before. I'm so glad you spotted it. At least I know someone read it thoroughly at least (-; Thanks again. Val