Lovetide
By Ewan
Wed, 18 Mar 2009
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You said it was like the sea coming to the shore,
the last wave overwhelmed by just one more,
the water boils with jealousy unjust
until fear cools it - as it must.
Sadness laps our hearts, anger roils over despair
but before foaming hate submerges us, take care;
be patient, wait! Ensure the count is seven -
that wave comes, and we are in heaven.
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Like a lullaby, soothing and
Like a lullaby, soothing and sad...and so true, the ebb and fall...I'll remember to count to seven next time!
J x
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Great use of imagery; and
Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Great use of imagery; and true, so true! Nice one!
Chris
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that's a lovely poem,
Permalink Submitted by littleditty on
that's a lovely poem, enjoyed :)
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