Three Days in the Wild
By ItsSteveDave
Wed, 15 Aug 2012
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Three days in the Wild;
No geezers giving me the cocked eye,
Or concrete slabs rising from the pits of hell
To tower above me,
No smile-fronted hidden agendas -
Just the ephemeral embrace of colours and textures,
A blur in the mind’s eye.
A man can find direction in this climate,
But can he follow it home?
Three days in the Wild,
Locked in coitus with crisp air,
A heady lifting sensation from the feet
To the tip of my longest hair.
A bow to the mother who made this –
She who arranged each blade of grass this way,
Chose each tree's purposeful angle;
The lines are stock still at distance,
But ever moving, filling spaces
Given by the wind.
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This has both a holiday feel
This has both a holiday feel to it and an underlying sense of desolation.... It has a dessert essence.
Locked in coitus with crisp air,... favourite line.
I like the getting away from it all attitude, in this. Nice one.
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I like this steve, some
I like this steve, some lovely phrasing and I think Verdana's transporting is on the money. (Can you recommend a decent pair of walking boots and 60L plus rucksack?)
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Enjoyed, this line I
Enjoyed, this line I liked.
"...the ephemeral embrace of
colours and textures..."
ps I note Verdana post ending in "...ISD..."
It's not infectious,is it?
ScoZen
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