Love

Cherry

By joanne-jellyfish

Sun, 14 Jun 2009
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5 comments
 

I breathe the words. Form them
With the bow of my lips.
I set my teeth. Too small for this big thing
I trip over the meaning.

Certificate U
Poem
Love

Comments

Submitted by sunshine on
Tight - straight to the point but beautifully with a hint of reluctance or having been taken unaware. Margot

Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
A great little short - my favourite type, as long as they say something and this does. Well done, enjoyed! Chris

Submitted by DraxB on
yep short and sweet. suits me well.

Submitted by joanne-jellyfish on
Thank you all for your feedback! I wanted to try my hand at a 'love' poem, but without the excess romance - hopefully everybody can relate to a time when they were in love and couldn't work it all out :D

Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Congrats on the well deserved cherry, great stuff. Chris ;)