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By ladylazarus
Mon, 03 Nov 2008
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A growing din
and the clattering
the clattering
of footsteps
on metal steps
packed in
tight
tight bodies
the tight pursed lips of the woman
the man too close behind her
his grin
spilled out like fish
flapping and glistening
gasping for air
the ringing of foot on stair
toward the light and the smoke and the glare.
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A wonderful experiment in
Permalink Submitted by capoeiragem on
A wonderful experiment in sound and rhythm, thoroughly enjoyed this. Thanks!
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