The human being

By Parson Thru

Fri, 13 Apr 2018
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I suppose we’re a failed experiment,
the human being
Perhaps, when they invented us,
they had something better in mind

But here we are
20% real
80% invention
Measured by what we reveal
And what we prefer not to mention

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Comments

Submitted by celticman on

I'd guess less than 5% real. 

 

Submitted by Parson Thru on

I was toying with ten, but you're probably right.

Parson Thru

Submitted by Alan Russell on

The conclusion of failure can only be reached when something is ended.  We are all still here so the experiment must still be ongoing and therefore cannot be a failure; yet.  (Must find darkened room to lie down in after that.)

Alan

Ringwood

Great Britain

Submitted by Parson Thru on

Nice to have that hope

Parson Thru

Submitted by iwylie on

Totally clever and to the point. 

 

Submitted by Parson Thru on

Glad you liked it cialre.

Hopefully predictive text has remembered that spelling. :)

Parson Thru