It's Ok To Be Sad For A Minute Or Two

By prettyrose

Mon, 03 Mar 2014
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I know the sun doesn't 

Shine all the time and

The rain can pound so very

Heavy at your worn down

door.

 

With the winter chill not making

Things easy for your arthritic

Hip, which gets so cold

And sore.

 

Then there's this time of

Year when you start to think

Of your mother, who can't be

Here any more.

 

Or when you get annoyed with

Your neighbours, for making noise,

Through thin brick walls.

 

Then you stop feeling sorry

For yourself, and remember

There are other's far worse off

Than you.

  

 

 

  

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Comments

Submitted by Bee on

Hi Trish.

Your poem had me in tears from the dear title, right through to the concluding thought - it's all so beautifully put. I found it very moving and heartwarming.

Bee

Submitted by prettyrose on

smileyAww Bee, I don't to make you crysad.But so glad you enjoyed it, you almost made me cry with your kind comment.Thank you so much. I felt It could have been better, and originally It was going to be a quick lyric of sunshine, but it turned into this poem.

Thank you again Bee, your words are always appreciated and mean so much.

 

Take Care

 

Trish x

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by Sooz006 on

With winter chill's not making... no apostrophe. 

There's other's far worse off...no apostrophe.

 

Then you.... is this an intentional play on words? If not ... than you.

 

I think we all feel it more in winter, little niggles that are easy to overlook in summer bog down and hang us in winter. You caputred this very well in this poem. Well thought out and relevant. I enjoyed this, thank you.  And keep smiling...spring's a coming.

 

 

 

 

 

Submitted by prettyrose on

smileyHi Sooz006.

Thank you for taking the time to read my work,smiley I did proof read it,obviously not good enough lol.That will teach me for rushing to put it lol. But glad you enjoyed poem.

 

And no Sooz006, It wasn't meant to be an international play on words, although I shall try to incorporate that in my work for the future.It was another oversight, Thank you for pointing them out.

 

Take care

 

 

 

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Enjoyable and heart-warming, Trishsmiley

Tina

 

Submitted by prettyrose on

smileyHi Tina, I hope your well.

Thank you for your lovely comments,they always mean a lot.smiley.

 

Take care

 

Trish x

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx