Lady of the Woods

By skinner_jennifer
Thu, 28 Jul 2011
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Oh Silver Birch by
Moonlight Shine...
Soft Whispers race,
through your dainty
leaves divine,
with Feminine touch
you nourish the earth,
beneath your trunk...
where all of nature's
flowers choose to grow,
fungi suckle at your roots -
the Milkcap and Chanterelle,
thrive in the depths of your
adopted form - a safe haven
for them and others to dwell,
my therapeutic friend
your column stands so
tall and proud...a
century come and gone
where memories linger on,
your leaves take shape
below pendulous...
downy - silky flowers
resembling yellow...
weeping caterpillars
ready for to fall,
many legends follow you, for you
are made of Male and Female Form,
with Splendour you dance on as one.
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This is really beautiful,
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
This is really beautiful, Jenny. (Just needs an apostrophe. I.e. "nature's flowers")
I liked this stanza especially...fond of mushrooms as I am:-)
"fungi suckle at your roots -
the Milkcap and Chanterelle,
thrive in the depths of your
adopted form - a safe haven
for them and others to dwell..."
I too love the Silver Birch. We are lucky to have some in our garden that shade our little vegetable patch. Beautiful trees indeed;-)
Tina
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The Birch always reminds me
The Birch always reminds me of gumtrees- from my childhood in Aussie. Thanks for bringing back the memory Jenn- a beautiful poem this
love this :
your leaves take shape
below pendulous...
downy - silky flowers
resembling yellow...
weeping caterpillars
ready for to fall,
this is the danish birch too
;)Pia
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They are lovely names,
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
They are lovely names, Jenny, and I am really encouraged that your local council have started such a project, and may all the trees grow tall, and strong.
Tina
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I really enjoyed this poem
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
I really enjoyed this poem Jenny - I love silver birches, except possibly the one in my garden which is too near my house and getting to the age when it might just keel over (hopefully in the opposite direction!) A beautiful and accurate description.
One little typo at the end of the first stanza - should be divine
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Probably my favourite poem
Probably my favourite poem of yours now Jenny - really well done.:-)
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Congrats on the cherry
Congrats on the cherry Jenny- richly deserved for this gem- such a charming description.
No sun today but rain and warmth- so I suppose it's okay-
;D Pia
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I'm not particularly "into
Permalink Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
I'm not particularly "into nature" having lived in concrete slabs and cities my whole life but this piece made me want to find the nearest forest and roll around in the soil. This is really, really beautiful.
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Really stunning, Jenny -
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Really stunning, Jenny - magical, actually ;) Well done on the cherry!
Magic xxx
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Many congrats with this,
Permalink Submitted by RachelPatricia on
Many congrats with this, Jenny - very magical, as Magic so rightly said, and I too wanted to 'do a Maggy' and roll in some fresh earth! I adore nature and trees and have actually got two little apple trees growing in pots in my yard that the children started from seeds last summer. They're the pride and joy of all my gardening experiments and I simply can't wait for the day I climb up into their limbs and pick my first apple and rest there with a good book - just need a bit of land for them because they're not going to thrive much in the farty little terracotta pots they're in at the minute - want a tree? ;)
Really enjoyed this, your love for all things green and glorious shines through in every stanza and, like FB, I think this is my new favourite of yours - it's hard to beat The Chosen Ones, but this comes very close ;)
Rachel xx
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Wow, such a beautiful piece!
Wow, such a beautiful piece! I have never read anything so amazingly peacful... By far, this is probably one of the best poems I have ever read before... Wow...
I hope you write more of them because I want to read more.
Savannah
Sav
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Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new skinner-Jennifer
congrats; on the cherry!
well deserved, Really magical poem
of true beauty of nature, especially the
way you have written it. I have and in some gardens,
little sprigs of silver root leaves, is that Silver Birch too? I tried a cherry stone, took 2 years before anything showed?
The words of this poem are excellent, magical like fairies dancing in a ring, spiritually. Most have said, but this is therapeutic too, people no gardens,
can imagine and experience colour's and names, you have woven,written into it. Names I don't know can look up and read about. Just beautiful! Or some have only window boxes. Thankyou.
julie xx If haven't said broadbands back on 48 hr wait. Do you want me delete, long letter.
"jazz" the cat "Green Eyes! been in and laying on duvet, crying, mine put his head round door low, cried like Jazz does, in came, as usual Answers us.
Lays on table, and rubbing his chin on computer screen, beautiful. And I don't know how long took for you to do this poem, must be very pleased!
Results. Sun is shining here, got clear up.
Have a good week-end.
julie xx
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