MY DREAM
By skinner_jennifer
Wed, 09 Feb 2011
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Oh! the joy of being young,
of chasing dreams in songs we sung,
I danced sky-clad till day is done,
my naked body in the sun,
now the leaves toss about in a dance,
I move with them as if in a trance,
with fear in my heart and trembling hands,
I wonder what's happened to our lands,
why do I see day after day,
people's dreams taken away,
struggling hard to make their way,
in a world where evil seems to pay?
I want to feel the wind in my face,
see leaves tossed all over the place,
where every creed, colour and race,
can transform this earth with a touch of faith.
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This is beautiful, Jenny,
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
This is beautiful, Jenny, with some really effective imagery.
'I danced sky-clad till day is done'.
A lovely line.
Much enjoyed.
Tina
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Hello skinnerJ. Agree with
Hello skinnerJ.
Agree with Sand lady.
I liked...
"...where every creed, colour and race,
can transform this earth with a touch of faith..."
Will keep fingers crossed and wish for that.
Kind regards
ScoZen
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Oh! the joy of being
Oh! the joy of being young,
of chasing dreams in songs we sung,
I danced sky-clad till day is done,
my naked body in the sun,
The land of lost content Jenny! - love this opening and enyoyed the poem as a whole. Really well done. :-)
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Yes I agree with the
Yes I agree with the others.A great poem with a lot of belief and hope. I hope that our faith can see us through too.
;)Pia
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Jenny, I love this! It has
Jenny, I love this! It has a unique quality of making a statement about negativity in an upbeat and positive way, it sucks you in!
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