Smooth Sounds Of Summer

By skinner_jennifer

Tue, 26 Jul 2016
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She sits alone on

her old garden chair,

musical notes clinging

to gentle breezes,

 

sound waves drifting

taking her back,

lingering like

honeysuckle fragrance,

 

flavor of strawberry Summers,

can't help but be astounded

by the beauty – quivering,

her blue eyes shut tight.

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Submitted by Rhiannonw on

I like the reminder of the beauty of sound and scent (as her eyes are shut tight), and the sound triggering memories and lingering as fragrance does. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

You got exactly what I was trying to convey Rhiannon.

Many thanks for stopping by and reading. Appreciate the comment too.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by seashore on

Memories alert the senses...nice one Jenny.

Submitted by jeand on

Hi Jenny

I liked the honeysuckle on the breeze, and the jangle of windchimes, maybe. Very nostalgic

Jean

Jean Day

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Coral,

I'm glad you liked this poem. Appreciate you reading and letting me know you.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Windchimes! Now there's something I didn't think of while writing this poem Jean...just love them.

Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by Linda Wigzell Cress on

Simple and dreamy. A real breath of warm air. Lovely.

Linda

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I loved your comment Linda. Simple and dreamy, my sentiments exactly. Thank you so much.

Jenny. smiley