I think there's valid scope for argument as to how that young woman truly feels about what she did a few years ago. I don't have a position on that; like most people I'm too far detachjed to really know her state of mind. But the fact remains...
Assuming this is written from a perspective of around 20+ years ago, as references suggest World War One and it mentions the ex-soldier's centenary. Good in conveying a lot through a handful of vivid images.
That's lovely Kilb.
Posted on Sat, 27 May 2023
Concise, clever and quite touching
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Good dark fun ...
Posted on Sun, 14 May 2023
... although I'm sure I saw this place on lastminute.com.
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Good story.
Posted on Tue, 21 Feb 2023
I like the idea who's perfectly logical, that a profound physical change leads to a big change in emotions.
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Tantalising images, and I
Posted on Sat, 21 Jan 2023
Tantalising images, and I like the nod to Edgar Allen Poe.
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Intriguing images ....
Posted on Sun, 15 Jan 2023
... and a mysterious ring to it, but also a hint of something uplifting at the end. Good one Laurie.
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Made me smile
Posted on Wed, 28 Dec 2022
Wetherspoons ... great place for a first date.
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Short, bitter sweet and very
Posted on Sun, 11 Dec 2022
Short, bitter sweet and very powerful. I think you convey all the emotions in this with great skill.
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15?
Posted on Wed, 23 Nov 2022
I think there's valid scope for argument as to how that young woman truly feels about what she did a few years ago. I don't have a position on that; like most people I'm too far detachjed to really know her state of mind. But the fact remains...
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Good one Laurie
Posted on Fri, 04 Nov 2022
I love the sense of defiance against the inevitable in the final stanza.
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Good one Ewan
Posted on Sun, 06 Nov 2022
Assuming this is written from a perspective of around 20+ years ago, as references suggest World War One and it mentions the ex-soldier's centenary. Good in conveying a lot through a handful of vivid images.
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