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A Piece of Cake
So far so good.
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In the Garden Room
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Wings of Silence
Past failures
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About a Boy
He's made from chocolate !
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I love them. I have the deep
Posted on Thu, 04 Sep 2014
I love them. I have the deep purple as well as the more common lilac, thanks to my dear friend and neighbour, Lil, who I sadly lost a few years since. I have taken many cuttings from the white, but they have always reverted. I love to watch the...
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The promise is wonderful -
Posted on Wed, 03 Sep 2014
The promise is wonderful - heartbreakingly so, and makes it all so clear. Such lovely words, Tina. Sad time.
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Dear Elsie,
Posted on Sat, 30 Aug 2014
Dear Elsie,
so nice to see you again. This piece is beautifully written with warmth and honest affection. Sounds like you had so much fun together and made some great memories. Such a lovely letter. She sounds wonderful.
Bee x...
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Oh my goodness - an arpeggio
Posted on Fri, 29 Aug 2014
Oh my goodness - an arpeggio of butterflies! I can see the exact movement in a musical picture. I feel the tension in this, of waiting. And the rush at the start. Great writing is like painting and you are an artist, Tina.
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'less embarrassing things to
Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2014
'less embarrassing things to discuss than death.' This line stands out to me. Such a quick pace in this poem, as if glossing over the unwanted sight of grief. And then her desolation in the ordinaryness of weather. So moving and undramatically...
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Hi PT. This is written in a
Posted on Thu, 21 Aug 2014
Hi PT. This is written in a matter of fact fashion that casually tells of your early school life with the acceptance of discipline which must have brought fear on an every day basis. It's a fact that teachers don't always know what to do in order...
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Hi Tina. What really gets me
Posted on Mon, 18 Aug 2014
Hi Tina. What really gets me about this piece is that I can hear as much as I can see in it. Brilliant and as usual, very beautiful - as are those memories. That's a great title, too.
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So clever how you use and
Posted on Mon, 21 Jul 2014
So clever how you use and develop the intensity and clarity of vision from nature in minute detail through to the shocking reality of the last subject. It sort of creeps up on you - you see where you are being led, but it gets you anyway....
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It is what it is, Rhiannon.
Posted on Sat, 19 Jul 2014
It is what it is, Rhiannon. Feelings well explored. I was interested at your differing rhymes that seem to fit really well here, with the changing moods and opinions of the subject. Hard to deal with, but there seems a great deal of understanding...
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The theme is really cleverly
Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2014
The theme is cleverly worked into this along with the message. Fabulously rhyming, too, which for me keeps the interest and enhances the subject matter.
I enjoyed reading your poem so much, Rhiannon, and I'll have another look at it later...
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