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BLUE BIRD ( PART SIX )

By skinner_jennifer on Tue, 08 Feb 2011

I hope that this last part does not offend anyone, it's certainly not my intention.

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BLUE BIRD ( PART FIVE )

By skinner_jennifer on Tue, 08 Feb 2011

A slight tinge of erotica in this part.

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BLUE BIRD ( PART FOUR )

By skinner_jennifer on Tue, 08 Feb 2011

Ray makes a decision.

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BLUE BIRD ( PART THREE )

By skinner_jennifer on Sat, 05 Feb 2011

Hope you're staying with the story.

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Hi Tina,

Posted on Fri, 06 Feb 2015

Hi Tina,

if walls could talk, what stories they could tell. It was as if those walls were talking through your words. Observing the accounts, I even got a picture in my head of each reflection. Very well put.

Jenny.

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Posted in For Sale - Sold as Seen

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Aesthetically pleasing to

Posted on Sun, 01 Feb 2015

Aesthetically pleasing to read.

Jenny.

Posted in Orbital

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I too really enjoyed your

Posted on Mon, 26 Jan 2015

I too really enjoyed your story and that picture too, which I can see captured your imagination beautifully.

Jenny.

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Hi there Dynamaso,

Posted on Thu, 04 Sep 2014

Hi there Dynamaso,

great poem with rhythm and rhyme.

You show that the written word can take us many places that we had no idea existed, till we actually come to think about and write them down.

Jenny.

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Hi Elsie,

Posted on Sat, 30 Aug 2014

Hi Elsie,

A great snap of a holiday in writing. Enjoyed reading.

Jenny.

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A gripping read, the moral

Posted on Wed, 20 Aug 2014

A gripping read, the moral of this story is. Don't meddle in things that don't concern you.

Well done.

Jenny.

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What a great story, I loved

Posted on Sun, 17 Aug 2014

What a great story, I loved hearing about the dwellers of Ochre-ridge. Some wonderful metaphors within the story too. This kind of reminded me of something that Dylan Thomas would write.

Brilliant read and very much enjoyed.

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Hi there RADDman,

Posted on Fri, 15 Aug 2014

Hi there RADDman,

I too thought this had a touch of Animal Farm to it. Had this picture in my mind of cows at a Union Meeting as I was reading...very funny! ...

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You've captured so much love

Posted on Thu, 14 Aug 2014

You've captured so much love in your words. This was a pleasure to read.

Jenny.

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There's such saddness in this

Posted on Fri, 08 Aug 2014

There's such saddness in this poem Tina,

the words are those that I can relate to, when you love someone so deeply that they've been a part of your life for so long, it's hard to imagine them not there. Yes...this definitely bought a...