Springtime! I.P.
By threeleafshamrock
Tue, 24 Mar 2009
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The sun hoisted itself
towards its zenith
as a Blackbird fought
the blue headed worm
I had to prepare the garden
for my ‘baby.’
Every year, at this time,
It was demanded.
The grass had to be cut!
A simple task,
For the growth was not
yet in summers flow
I set up the frame just
behind the conservatory;
where - I fancied – I could
watch my seed grow.
I pulled the netting tight;
securing with stakes.
It was warm work but
necessary for safety.
I stood admiring the work
As my young son ran
From the house shrieking;
“Springtime! Springtime!”
“Yes”, I laughed, lifting him
“It’s Springtime again”
He cheered, “Thanks daddy!”
As I threw him onto the trampoline.
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You've really been inspired
You've really been inspired by 'spring' haven't you? This one is a wonderful snapshot of fatherly joy. Thanks again, mate.
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Boing! Lovely build up to a
Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on
Boing! Lovely build up to a big smile :-)atb L
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a fabulous snapshot - big
a fabulous snapshot - big parental love rush!
my girls too are bouncing, great innit, spring!
ax
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Wonderful, wonderful,
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Wonderful, wonderful, Chris:-)
I've never had a go on trampoline. Hula-hoops were all the rage in my time. I even injured myself with one of these, so goodness knows what mischief I would have done with a trampoline.
Your poem is beautiful.
Tina xx
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'The sun hoisted
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
'The sun hoisted itself
towards its zenith
as a Blackbird fought
the blue headed worm'
Brilliant starting imagery Chris and a lovely poem ;)
Magic xxx
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a very enjoyable read. the
Permalink Submitted by Curse of 222 on
a very enjoyable read. the opening stanza pulls you into a wonderful snapshot. the ending is cute.
good job!
jason
jason
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