The Bronze Soldier
By threeleafshamrock
Tue, 08 Dec 2009
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The rain ran like a veil from the peak of his bronze cap.
His face did not seem stern; just...young.
I could discern no animation in his expression.
The sculptor, crafted no madness,
no determination, no sorrow;
only innocence!
He stood at ease, his rifle
held loosely away from him,
as he looked into the distance.
I found myself following his gaze.
He stared out to sea, toward Dover's white walls;
at his feet, had been placed a wreath of red poppies.
The angry waves exploded all around.
Amidst the screeching of the gulls,
I chanced I heard a whistle blow...
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Great stuff, Chris. You are
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Great stuff, Chris. You are in fine form;-)
Tina XX
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'His face did not seem
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
'His face did not seem stern; just...young.
I could discern no animation in his expression.
The sculptor, crafted no madness,
no determination, no sorrow;
only innocence!'
- brilliant, brilliant stanza Chris! Your war poems are always so wonderful and atmospheric!
Magic xxx
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