Warzone
By Louise178
Sun, 21 Nov 2010
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6 comments
I walked into a warzone
unkown
it was dark, I was totally
alone
couldn't see, couldn't speak
a terrible fear, it took
hold
a novice to these weapons
I was useless, pathetic, I was
dumb
objective, knowledgeable, patient
no
I was hysterical, frightened
yes
I walked into a warzone and
ran
back to the daylight and
sun.
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powerful, I like the sparse
Permalink Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
powerful, I like the sparse form and how nothing in this is superfluous.
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Completely missed this
Completely missed this Louise - agree with Maggy and Sunday's Child although I can't tell if the warzone is a metaphor or not? (I think it is) :-)
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Well done! It brought back
Permalink Submitted by Oldwarrior on
Well done! It brought back bad memories!!
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