Full Stop.
By MistakenMagic
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It's true: we've co-authored a masterpiece.
Our imagery, our perfect symmetry
can't be matched - we moved
as one entity, attached for so long.
My pen was your pen, and we wrote
in sync; my ink - your ink.
Beautifully, carefully, we crafted
the climax - the choreography exact
for a flawless closing paragraph...
Yet, when it came to that final sentence,
you got cold feet, kept grasping the pen
because your life depended on it.
We attempted a full stop. I made the dot,
but you flicked it into a comma,
we both paused to reconsider.
Trying again, you knocked
my hand and I scrawled a dash –
then you dragged out an ellipsis...
Frustrated, I tried to go it alone,
write another best-seller.
But it was an abrupt, slim volume -
no chart-topper. I came back to find
your scribbling ready to burst
into a rambling epilogue.
Now, finally, I’m putting my foot down:
enough! I snatch away your pen.
What we've written is wonderful -
we can't ruin it now. It's time to start over.
So I stamp it down; the gunshot,
the chop - the full stop.
Now we're ready for another adventure -
a move into a different genre; a new world,
a new book... and a new chapter.
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It's always a new chapter.
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Hi Magic, this is very
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Hi Magic, Congratulations,
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Rebecca, this is indeed a
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A cracking poem Magic, much
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You manage to draw out the
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Hi Magic, It is more
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An interesting piece, most
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I really enjoyed Magic. I
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A clever, imaginative and
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Glad you ar ok from block of
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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haha great sounds like you
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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