What I wanted to shout while the steps were moving

Poem of the week

By span

Sun, 09 Jan 2011
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9 comments
 

Dear beautiful stranger who stared at me
on the escalator -

I think we could make something happen.
I have seen a house with walls white as pages.
We could take it.

I have a lot of belongings.
You might like my poems.
I might admire your ambition.

We could swim in each other,
compare our crap drawings of trees.

Certificate U
Poem
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by camilla on
Liked it particularly "white as pages" "crap drawing of trees"

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
I really like this one span

 

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new span Enjoyed this to Well deserved cherry! Like same line as camilla "white as pages" "crap drawings of trees" julie x

Submitted by fatboy74 on
Love this - well done. :-)

 

Submitted by seashore on
Lovely.

Submitted by shoe on
Something in these few lines that captivates, richly deserved cherry.

 

Submitted by JoseHdz on
love it.

Submitted by barryj1 on
Very visual poem. I especially liked the tongue-in-cheek humor.

barryj1

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