WHEN SPRING AWOKE

By skinner_jennifer

Mon, 28 Feb 2011
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14 comments
 

Whispers came softly
amongst the daffodils,
'spring is here,'
they gently sigh,

there's a cry
on the breeze,
soon there will be
blossom on the trees,

once again winter chills
will be no more,
when spring once again
comes knocking at our door,

the spirits of nature
will come alive,
when they spy the
new buds starting to arrive.

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Comments

Submitted by seashore on
Spring can't come too soon this year, Jenny. Good to read an optimistic Spring poem. Nice one.

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Thankyou so much for your kind comment seashore, I know exactly what you mean, I love the spring, the garden seems to come alive and those beautiful daffodils are so desperate to open. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Highhat on
Tomorrow is officially the first day of the Spring season. I have been waiting for ages. Thanks for setting the scene Jenny. ;)Pia

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Great Pia, really glad I could set the scene, I'm glad for your sake that it's here once again. Thankyou again for reading and commenting. Jenny.

 

Submitted by peter_edward on
this is a well written poem, i like it

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Thankyou so much peter_edward, what a wonderful comment, you have really cheered me up thankyou again. Jenny.

 

Submitted by shoe on
The spirits of nature, whispering softly, I love that idea, lovely poem.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi shoe, thankyou so much for reading and leaving that special comment, it's very much appreciated. Jenny.

 

Submitted by MistakenMagic on
A beautiful poem, Jenny. I can't wait for spring either :) Magic xxx

 

Submitted by TVR on
Lovely poem, Jenny. Full of optimism and hopefully lots of good things to come. Well done. sue

TVR

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Thankyou for reading Magic, your words are so kind. Jenny. xxx

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi sue, yes it's great to see the buds coming along in the garden and the bulbs wanting to flower, what a great time of the year spring is, thankyou for reading and such a great comment. Jenny.

 

Submitted by fatboy74 on
I agree with all this praise Jenny, you have brought it all to life in this poem. Thanks for the read. :-)

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Thankyou so much fatboy, spring is such a special time especially when you have a garden, it makes you feel good to be alive, I bet you know what I mean. Thankyou for reading and your great comment, always appreciated. Jenny.