Little things
By shoe
Thu, 07 Apr 2011
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15 comments
The little things count,
so I'm told,
and I tally them up now,
as a child does, on fingers.
Small tokens;
A new colouring book
on market day, and
those pink plastic shoes
I'd wanted all summer,
for christmas.
Do you now, I wonder,
cherish these
infrequent letters
and last minute cards.
Do you count the minutes
we spend on the phone,
in single figures,
on one hand.
Do you turn them
-fake plastic gems-
in the dark earth
of your heart,
wiping them off,
naming them love,
making them count.
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Hi shoe, you have written a
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi shoe,
you have written a great little poem here, reminding
us how important the little things in life are.
I particularly like the third stanza, it's wonderful
how much better you feel, after reading a letter
from a friend, or a phone conversation, or recieving
a special card.
Yes I really did enjoy this special little poem.
Thankyou for the read.
Jenny.
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Read this twice shoe - and
Read this twice shoe - and may well read over and over. It's a gem. Particularly like the first four lines leading you in.
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I like this. Makes such an
I like this. Makes such an important statement
;)Pia
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I think we all appreciate
I think we all appreciate the little things the older we get. Excellent poem.
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Ah Shirley - both cherry
Ah Shirley - both cherry picked on the same day and both poems to do with not taking things for granted perhaps- could such little things have greater import I wonder?
Seriously though, I enjoyed this very much.
:--) xxx
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You are spot on with the
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
You are spot on with the philosphy in your poem, shoe. Well done on the cherry;-)
Tina
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Shoe, hello. What can I
Shoe, hello.
What can I say...only someone who owned a TR7 would have "...-fake plastic gems-..."
ScoZen
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Really nice, shoe. Made me
Really nice, shoe. Made me think. This kind of poem (reflective thoughts) kind of puts things in one's own life into perspective. Thanks.
sue
TVR
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I forgot to take anything to
I forgot to take anything to work for lunch yesterday and was destined to eleven hours with nothing, I'm stuck in the shop once we open for trade. Dave walked in with a sandwich and a coffee for me and it could have been a diamond. Little things matter. Nice one Shoe.
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That last stanza is simply
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
That last stanza is simply stunning, Shirley! Very well done on a richly deserved cherry :)
Magic xxx
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Poetic wisdom stunningly put
Permalink Submitted by RachelPatricia on
Poetic wisdom stunningly put - shoe, this is just brilliant :)
Rachel xx
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