Silence
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Tue, 12 Apr 2011
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The dark interior
of cupboards, drawers,
wardrobes, smell of dust
and fading blue water,
spiders spin there;
silky dream catchers
for impossible dreams
Shadows at the door,
no longer a promise
but rather, a taunt,
catching me every time
Where there might have
flickered, once, hope;
a second, a third, a final chance,
dust lies as silent, as thick,
as all the words we ever said
and still I cannot hear...
...a breath, merely, not even that,
rather the tunnel, moments after
the train has gone, or the deadness
of cracked glass, nothing comes back,
no matter how loudly I scream.
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I just love this, shoe.
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
I just love this, shoe. Those wonderful opening lines, my favourite:-
"The dark interior
of cupboards, drawers,
wardrobes, smell of dust
and fading blue water,
spiders spin there;
silky dream catchers
for impossible dreams"
Tina
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I've just re-read Samuel
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
I've just re-read Samuel Beckett's 'Endgame' - and your haunting imagery here really reminded me of Beckett's 'bare interior'. Brilliant poem!
Magic xxx
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I really love this Shoe -
Permalink Submitted by Overthetop1 on
I really love this Shoe - lovely, poignant, and stays with you. Quite special.
Overthetop1
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I agree with previous
I agree with previous comments - a real `mood' poem. Melancholy - yes that's it. Lovely.
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stunning, so beautifully
Permalink Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
stunning, so beautifully crafted just like a silky spider web. I'm in love with these lines:
...a breath, merely, not even that,
rather the tunnel, moments after
the train has gone
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