From a dream

By Parson Thru

Tue, 14 Jun 2011
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The water came and it came.
And the words flowed,
no two the same.
And the ropes they groaned
under the strain.
While the swimmer pulled
and kicked in vain.
I wish I'd brought my hat.

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Submitted by thanksforthepar... on
made me smile :)

 

Submitted by Parson Thru on
Thank you. Your comment made me smile. There, we have just brightened the world up a little. :)

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Submitted by alice sunderland on
i read this and liked it. i cant explain why - but i did. thought it was worth telling you tho.

 

Submitted by Parson Thru on
Thank you. I appreciate that a lot. It has delved a bit deeper into me with re-reading. Doesn't seem to be about the same thing as when I first wrote it. Hopefully it will keep shifting and changing.

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Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Parson Thru I enjoyed this very much, short and sweet, and complete. I know what you mean about, changing words of poems, I do it and could loose the zing of it, or may not. I look and think did I do that? So mostly leave as it was. The world certainly nedds a smile, and more consideration for all. Made me smile (:- julie

Submitted by Parson Thru on
I agree Julie. Thanks seashore. :~)

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Submitted by Parson Thru on
I agree Julie. Thanks seashore. :~)

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Submitted by seashore on
Nice one